“Marry, Bang, Kill” by Andrew Battershill details the consequences that pursue Tommy Marlo after he steals a laptop from the daughter of the head of a big-time motorcycle gang in British Columbia. After using the laptop to take more from the gang and realizing he’s in quite a lot of danger, he runs away to Quadra Island, off the coast of British Columbia, to visit his mom before trying his luck living further north. Unbeknownst to him, he is followed.
This is a book that shows multiple viewpoints. Tommy, our titular protagonist, doesn't actually make up a large portion of the book's perspective. Other important characters we see through the eyes of are Mouse, a retired corrupt cop, Mike, a rather dense cop, Glass Jar, Mouse’s drug dealer and fervent hater of hit show Breaking Bad, and Greta, the hitman hired by the motorcycle gang to hunt Tommy down. The use of multiple perspectives is something that may need to be carefully written; though the reader would get to see the thoughts of several people rather than one, they therefore might not be as invested in their lives. With hostility between some of the characters as a plot point, however, that feels slightly more intentional.
The main strength of this book would likely involve the aforementioned characters. Their motivations and thought processes are consistent and work with their personalities, and it is their relationships with each other that the book seems to invest in the most. Their dialogue is sometimes a bit strange— quite random and involving topics that often don’t have much to do with anything— but though that is a departure from other books, perhaps that is closer in tone to conversations in real life. If not, it could also be explained by the fact that half of the characters are probably on drugs at all times.
The main weakness, I feel, would be that the plot leaves a few things left unfinished. At the end of the book, there are several unresolved issues (skip the parentheses if you want to avoid spoilers, but as an example, the motorcycle gang threatened to shoot up the island if Tommy wasn’t returned within a certain timeframe, which was then not elaborated on at the end). Though some stories work well when left open-ended, it is tricky to do so in a way that won’t be just a bit unsatisfying. It is also somewhat chaotic and random in general, which I suppose could be a positive for some readers and a negative for others depending on what they want out of a story. Additionally, the beginning is rather slow, which might discourage possible readers.
All in all, with alright character consistency but a moderately uncertain plot, I rate “Marry, Bang, Kill” with 3 out of 5 stars.